{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526781","dateCreated":"1289181259","smartDate":"Nov 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526781"},"dateDigested":1531982619,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Layout","description":"Hi I think layout still looks like a report rather than a brief summary. I still re worked the second page.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526779","dateCreated":"1289133064","smartDate":"Nov 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526779"},"dateDigested":1531982619,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"2nd Paragaph","description":"I do not think we need to list all of the problems in the 2nd paragraph because we have it listed below in bullet form, i think just a summary that we have identified problems and also thier solutions.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526761","dateCreated":"1288992020","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526761"},"dateDigested":1531982619,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Summary?","description":"I thought that this executive summary was supposed to capture the main points of our report. The outline here looks like it would be the framework for an actual report.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526765","body":"Our text says Synopsis or Excutive Summary is a breif overview (one page) of a report's most important points, designed to give reader's a quick preview of the contents (p.450). You are correct so we need to re-work make a link and start again.","dateCreated":"1289006579","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526769","body":"Try the link I added at the bottom to see the rewrite I started but need to be finished.","dateCreated":"1289007814","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526771","body":"I added the summary so that it fit the layout. I agree that it may be a bit too detailed but I think that we can summarize more of its bullet points. I dont think doing a whole new page is necessary. Just rewrite the points so that they are smaller.","dateCreated":"1289066642","smartDate":"Nov 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526773","body":"I agree with Jessica. We do not need to rewrite the whole thing on another page. Look at page 438 in our textbook. There is an example of an Executive Summary. We can use what we have already to make it look more like the sample summary.","dateCreated":"1289069953","smartDate":"Nov 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526775","body":"I tried to summarize the report a bit. It still may be a bit long, but I couldn't decide what else to remove, maybe I've been looking at the report too long.. lol
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\nHope you guys can remove more of it, maybe change the layout a bit, see what we do not need... endless possibilities :)
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\nI dont know if we need the testimonials part in the summary so please remove it if need be..
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\nAlso I conjoined where we list all of the pros of e-learning & how e-learning will benefit Paper Products, Inc. - since I felt they were basically the same.","dateCreated":"1289081528","smartDate":"Nov 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526777","body":"I attempted to summarize the cons and their solutions into a second paragraph. Some were left out. I figure the rest would be covered in the report.","dateCreated":"1289090168","smartDate":"Nov 6, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526757","dateCreated":"1288983030","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526757"},"dateDigested":1531982620,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Layout Information","description":"I have updated the layout with the information and details. Please feel free to put in your updates and change around if you have other ideas.
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\nThere were lots of examples from other businesses who have used e-learning, I was thinking maybe make a testimonial section but felt that maybe it could be better set up this way, what do you think?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526749","dateCreated":"1288829314","smartDate":"Nov 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526749"},"dateDigested":1531982620,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Executive Summary","description":"Hi everyone! I figure I would start working on our Wiki. It seems like everyone pretty much agreed that this report would be supporting e-learning. Also, it seemed like in our discussion everyone agreed that there should be a section on the pros and a section on the cons- and the con section should include recommendations\/solutions. I will start us out with an outline for the executive summary.
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\n-Heidi S.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526755","body":"thanks for the outline, I added the details and tried to minimize the wording.. if you may find a more appealing visual layout, or if there is a bullet in the wrong part please feel free to change it :)
\nJess","dateCreated":"1288982646","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}