{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526753","dateCreated":"1288888745","smartDate":"Nov 4, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526753"},"dateDigested":1531982621,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"benefits vs. drawbacks order","description":"I like that you're asking questions about the order here!  One way of finding an answer is to consider your audience and that audience's feelings(if you know them) about e-learning.  If the person is against it, you might decide to start with drawbacks to connect with the reader, and then move into benefits.  If the person is for it, then you might do the reverse, but keeping in mind Kali's comment about ending on a positive note - so you might include a short statement at the end about there being more benefits.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nIf you don't know the person's feelings about e-learning, then you have to consider the emphasis that each paragraph's placement gives to the information.  Do you think readers would emphasize the info. more toward the beginning or the end?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526759","body":"I think the writer should emphasize the benefits of e-learning more towards the end of the report.  Ending the report on a positive note keeps the information fresh in the readers mind.  Laying out the cons at the beginning will grab the audience attention and make them want to read more.","dateCreated":"1288986153","smartDate":"Nov 5, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526751","dateCreated":"1288878687","smartDate":"Nov 4, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526751"},"dateDigested":1531982621,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"summary","description":"Hi, <br \/>\nI'm not saying I disagree with the new order of the summary, but I have to ask if we really want the benefits to come first, before the drawbacks.  Do we want the summary to end on a positive, benefit note... or keep it as ending on the drawbacks? Just asking, either way.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526739","dateCreated":"1288751462","smartDate":"Nov 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526739"},"dateDigested":1531982621,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"order","description":"Is it possible to list the benefits before the drawbacks? I just started with this wiki so I'm trying to catch up.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526731","dateCreated":"1288728257","smartDate":"Nov 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526731"},"dateDigested":1531982622,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Edited work by Professor Oaks","description":"Something as short and brief could work for the executive summary. The report isn't a long report and who want to make sure your executive summary and your report are proportionate. However, if we are to be creating an executive summary it should be more formal, so maybe add some headings and dress it up a bit. What is currently on the page I think to resemble more of a synopsis. What does everyone else think?<br \/>\nAshley","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526737","body":"I made a few minor edits to help make it look a bit more formal. And excuse my typo in the first post! We want to make sure, not who want to...oops!","dateCreated":"1288728714","smartDate":"Nov 2, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526741","body":"I like the changes that you made to the summary. I like the bold headings and the re-wording of the first section. I think it makes it look a little more organized.","dateCreated":"1288786796","smartDate":"Nov 3, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}