{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526727","dateCreated":"1288013723","smartDate":"Oct 25, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526727"},"dateDigested":1531982625,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Finally in!","description":"Hi guys! I was finally able to dive in to the wikis! It didn't let me have access to it before in the two past wikis, but hopefully from now on I'll be able to contribute more to the wikis and help everybody too. By the way, great job on the assignments and this resume!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526693","dateCreated":"1287849265","smartDate":"Oct 23, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526693"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"bullets","description":"in my opinion the bullets are quite bold. is there a way to down size them? just a suggestion not to offend the person who edited.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526695","body":"that's ok. when printed out the resume looks great. no change. pardon.","dateCreated":"1287849412","smartDate":"Oct 23, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526677","dateCreated":"1287783332","smartDate":"Oct 22, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526677"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"finally back 'in the loop'","description":"Hey guys.. thanks for responding to my earlier post. I found the changes to the resume under the history tab. My computer or the site were having difficulties communicating or something? I wasn't able to click on anything..my computer would just sit there, after a few emails back and forth.. I seem to be all set to go.
\nIt's been a rough couple days.. I went into the dentist yesterday to get a tooth looked at...ended up getting extensive work done on it, right then and there..and being 4 mos. pregnant.. I cant take pain meds =( ... I plan to be back on later this evening. Let me know if there is anything I can do to contribute? Thank you.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526683","body":"You poor thing! We all certainly wish you the best with everything. Hope you are feeling better soon!
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\nI'm liking the look of this resume but it seems to be lacking something... maybe a qualification list or keywords? Maybe accomplishments or something? Anyone have any ideas?","dateCreated":"1287800616","smartDate":"Oct 22, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526701","body":"Thanks! Taking it one day at a time, quite sore yet.
\nDid you mean something like awards received, that type of accomplishment? What about volunteer work, that may relate to the resume? I'm not sure if there's anything that would directly relate but, in a previous course I heard that it could help the resume have that "little" extra. Just a thought? Maybe it wont work for this situation?","dateCreated":"1287859016","smartDate":"Oct 23, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526717","body":"I think that "little extra" is always needed these days! :) That is what I meant... any special qualifications or accomplishments with special projects or events. If anyone has any ideas, maybe we could add them?
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\nMaybe she coordinated a benefit for her community or arranged a customer appreciation event at one of her jobs?","dateCreated":"1287959158","smartDate":"Oct 24, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526669","dateCreated":"1287631457","smartDate":"Oct 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526669"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"stronger verbs and more active phrasing","description":"Maybe her job descriptions can be beefed up a little... I changed some the phrasing for the following position.
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\nField Sales Representative, Fisher Scientific Instruments, City, State, January 2004 to present
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\n * Established effective customer relations
\n * Achieved increased revenue by selling laboratory instruments
\n * Created sales letters
\n * Attended trade shows
\n * Completed weekly sales reports","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526653","dateCreated":"1287608104","smartDate":"Oct 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526653"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Changes to Resume","description":"I would change the name and address info to be centered and updated the font.
\nThe job experience I would bullet point out experiences and condense the wording. The objective needs also to be more eye popping to get the possible employers attention","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526641","dateCreated":"1287446706","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526641"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Troubles","description":"Am I the only one who can't figure out where to read the revised resume? Maybe I'm just missing something? I can't seem to find anything. Hope this isn't a totally dumb question.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526643","body":"If you click on the link from Module 4 in our class, you should be brought to a page with a video on how the Wiki works. This page also lists the wiki assignments for module 3, 4, and 5. If you click on module 4's assignment, you will be taken to a page where you can select Hayes or Oaks. Below that selection is the resume that we are to use in this Wiki. This is the original.
\nPlease let me know if this helps.","dateCreated":"1287448543","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526645","body":"No question is a dumb question! We all get a little "lost" at times. Sarah is correct then once you are in Oak's 4.a section1 you can also click on History to view and compare exact changes others have made.","dateCreated":"1287476578","smartDate":"Oct 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526635","dateCreated":"1287444884","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526635"},"dateDigested":1531982626,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Changes to the resume","description":"Chapter 18 was interesting! I'll have to make some adjustments to my personal resume!
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\nI made some changes to the resume. Ashley, thank you for posting that. Please take a look... One concern I have is that Sylvia Manchester has a break in her employment of a few years. Should this be addressed in her resume?
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\nThanks!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526639","body":"That's a good question. Would there be a better way to address the gap in her employment? I will look into this a little more.","dateCreated":"1287446589","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526647","body":"I don't think we need to address it. It is only a year gap and it could easily been bc of school. What we do need to work on is vamping up the Objective though. It is way to generic and it does not address any employer needs only what kind of job she would like.","dateCreated":"1287477330","smartDate":"Oct 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526651","body":"made some changes","dateCreated":"1287534592","smartDate":"Oct 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526665","body":"objective what do you guys think of this objective to vamp it up?
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\nObtain a position as a team-player in a people-oriented organization where I can maximize my customer-service experience in a challenging environment to achieve the corporate goals.\u201d","dateCreated":"1287627734","smartDate":"Oct 20, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526673","body":"I like that for an objective. Maybe leave an objective off at least one version of a resume because her experience is a broad enough at this point?
\nI made changes to some of the phrasing under the Fisher position and Tour guide position. Also eliminated a few areas job duties that seemed expendable. No changes are permanent, right? We can go back?","dateCreated":"1287672535","smartDate":"Oct 21, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526627","dateCreated":"1287370597","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526627"},"dateDigested":1531982627,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"changes","description":"pardon but where do I look to see the changes that you've made?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"30526629","body":"If you go to the History tab it allows you to compare the edits made. Other than that I would copy and paste the original into a word document to reference as well. Hope that helps. I didn't change much just yet. I really just took out some personal info that was entered. I had to finish reading ch 18 before I went and did some serious editing!
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\nAshley","dateCreated":"1287404230","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"30526633","body":"If you look at where we can choose to enter into Hayes' or Oakes' Wiki, you can see the original resume displayed and can compare the changes with that. Hope that helps!","dateCreated":"1287444725","smartDate":"Oct 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"30526625","dateCreated":"1287345212","smartDate":"Oct 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"support","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/support","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1202793136\/support-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/communicationsforprofessionalsfa1hayes.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/30526625"},"dateDigested":1531982627,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Resume Started!","description":"Took out a few noticeable things in the resume to get this Wiki started! Remember we only have a week to complete this Wiki.
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\nAshley","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}